Pin money
If it’s 1849
your name’s Walter Hunt
and you owe fifteen bucks
to the draughtsman,
twisting a piece of wire
for three hours one afternoon
should be about enough time
to make the first safety pin
— complete with coil spring
and hidden point.
After you’ve sold the rights
and paid off your debt
you get to pocket
the small fortune of $85!
© 2011 by V. Nesdoly
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The story of Walter Hunt and how he invented the safety pin comes in several versions. The one below (from answers.com) claims he sold the rights for $100. Other versions say $400.
“The product that Hunt patented as a dress pin is what is commonly known as a safety pin. Hunt was anxiously trying to figure out how to pay back a $15 debt. While discussing his dilemma with a friend, Hunt was nervously twisting a piece of wire in his hand when he suddenly came up with the idea for a pin. Hunt’s creation improved upon existing safety pins in two important ways. First, the point was completely covered when the pin was closed so it was truly safe. Second, Hunt added a circular twist at the bend of the pin to act as a spring and hold it in place. Hunt took his new invention to a manufacturer named Jonathan Richardson and sold the rights to him for only $100. Hunt was able to pay off his debt, but he once again could not profit from future sales of his product.”
I posted this poem in response to a challenge to revive a dead metaphor. The original article is “Guy Kawasaki says to Use Poetry In Business“
Violet, great choice of a metaphor. You take on a perfect voice for this poem. Well done!
I enjoyed the history you included, too.
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Amazing history. In a very fun form. 🙂 (I’ve been telling my kids they should turn their history stuff into poems… a lot more fun.
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Pin Money. I love it!
By the title I thought is was going to be about pinning money in the hem of a garment. Now I see how a safety pin touches money in two ways…
Blessings.
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mind blowing,
your style of writing is outstanding.
smiles.
check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.
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